The weird story
Chapter 1
Rustle in the bushes
Once upon a time there were three friends. There names were Josh Darcy and Max. One day they decided to take stroll in the woods. Suddenly they heard something was in the bushes. Suddenly something leaped out they screamed as loud as they could ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. They ran that thing started to chase them but then it stopped. Not the next time grumbled the thing
Chapter 2
The next time
They ran back to the village and tried to talk but nothing came out. Suddenly they decided to walk towards the woods there words started to come back they were very faint so they kept going it lead them to a clearing they saw something it was sitting on a rock they went closer and saw it was their father he said ghghghghghgh josh suddenly realized that
This is a very spooky and exciting story Josh! I think you could put speech marks in where people are speaking next time.
ReplyDeleteI still haven't finished it but I just decided to post that blog thing
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