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This is a big, live tarantula at the Canterbury Museum.

Fun Run

midnight murder

 Chapter one:

         The first murder

“One night the clock struck eleven that’s the time when the crazy killer was coming it was full moon i heard a scream”. ahhhhhhhhhhh “that woke my mum she called my dad he did not answer” ahhhhhhhhhhh “i heard the scream again it was a very faint sound but i could still hear it must be from the golden gate bridge it might be a car crash. mum went back to bed i wondered if it was dad in the crash”.

“Now it was two twelve in the morning i was ridiculously tired so i did not go to uni”.

   Chapter two:

       The car crash

“When i went to uni again i needed to go by ship because the bridge had a big split in it maybe that's what the yelling was? I thought that dad was in the crash because dad did not come home but then i just got a text from dad he said are you at uni yet i replied no i’m on a ship why are you asking then after i had sent the message i had got of the ship and i biked to uni. after uni i caught another ship but it was smaller and when i got home i grabbed my tv remote and i went down to my room and i lay down  on my bunk and i turned the television on to listen to the news.” “in the night there was a storm the wind of the storm had cancelled my gym practise for the afternoon for the next day and that day uni was short but good it was still raining from the storm.”

   Chapter three:

                                                   The jerk

“That night i went to bed then i heard a tv turn on but my brother was asleep on the tv remote and he also had woken up because of the tv he woke up like he was a jerk and he gave me the remote and i put it up on my bunk side table and he went back to sleep and i did to” “the next morning when i had to go on the boat i was late because my brother needed to get to school in time because mum had gone to a interview and dad had been sick and he did not want to make someone else sick and i thought that was fine but i made myself late and my brother”.

   Chapter four:

     Up all night

“Because i was late i needed to catch up on my work after uni when i got home i went to the library to do some research done later on i went to the house i went to the basement to get a book of my great grandpa’s dad’s uni book i brought it up the basement steps they were very old but they could still hold me so i went to do some research on my new job my job will probably be a zookeeper or a wild animal tamer. So i did some research on some zoology in my great great grandpa’s book so i copied it onto my computer. So i also stayed up all night to do my work but it was worth it and the next day i did some job finding and i got to be a wild animal tamer and i made my own company”.

  Chapter five:

    My new job

“So i am doing quite good with my job so far i have tamed probably fifty six animals for the zoo.the zoo really appreciated it and then i thought why aren't i getting money.so this night me and dad sat on the couch and we had a wee talk before i went to bed.the next evening dad texted me then just after i put my phone in my pocket i had another message it was from mum she said that she had a car crash and can you pick me up after your work.i replied yes but do you have your purse mum said no ok then i replied i will need a day off work should i say to the zoo that i need a day off work.yes please cause i don’t want to be here till ten forty five.

By Sam and josh

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The weird story

 Chapter 1

Rustle in the bushes

Once upon a time there were three friends. There names were Josh  Darcy and Max. One day they decided to take stroll in the woods. Suddenly they heard something was in the bushes. Suddenly something leaped out they screamed as loud as they could ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. They ran that thing started to chase them but then it stopped. Not the next time grumbled the thing

     

       Chapter 2

    The next time

They ran back to the village and tried to talk but nothing came out. Suddenly they decided to walk towards the woods there words started to come back they were very faint so they kept going it lead them to a clearing they saw something it was sitting on a rock they went closer and saw it was their father he said ghghghghghgh josh suddenly realized that

Josh's Photo on Friday, 10 March 2017